Just a moment of peace

If I may, I'd like to offer some constructive criticism. I like the concept you've created here, a simple close-up portrait focusing on an interesting spot with a story behind it. The angle of the floor matches the angle of the model's body really well. My concern is the hair. Even though it is painted nicely, there is a disconnect between it's soft texture and the rough texture of the floor. I took a look at the original stock image, and I see she had very black hair with no details. In a situation like that, I would have recommended using the original hair to maintain a realistic shape of hair on a floor, and then build the painted hair on top of that. Other than that, you've done a good job making a rather non-conventional dark art.